Watch for consistency errors in your story

As a novelist or short story writer, among your chief goals is to establish and maintain a fictional dream, which occurs when readers actually feel like they are experiencing what is being read. One way to achieve that is to establish consistency in your story.

Consistency involves providing details that maintain the readers’ illusion of being in a different world. A number of writers have used various terms to explain consistency; among them is Ursula K. LeGuin’s “from Elfland to Poughkeepsie.”

Consistency is more than making sure you don’t write on one page that the sun rises in the north and then three pages later write it rises in the south. While that inconsistency certainly would need to be corrected, you’ll want to think even deeper about your story.

For example, story details can contradict one another because facts established in one part wouldn’t allow for facts presented later in the story to be true. In science fiction stories, this might occur when a civilization that’s suffered a global nuclear war is still capable of spaceflight. The odds are against this occurring, because the infrastructure to support spaceflight (the manufacturing of space parts and ship fuel) and the launch facilities probably wouldn’t exist if the war destroyed cities.

When writing your story, watch for these common consistency errors:
• Inadequate background – Characters should have the experience to possess certain knowledge or to solve certain problems. For example, would someone who has never picked up a gun in his life know how to aim and fire it let alone hit the target?
• Excessive luck/coincidence – The main character should be able to resolve the story’s problem not because they got lucky but because of their skills, talents and grit.
• Insufficient background motivation – For a character to be in a situation or to make a decision, they must have experienced something in their past that allows them to be involved. A teenage boy shouldn’t know the correct strategy to win a war, for example – but he might if he were a history buff and his father had served as a military officer.


My name is Rob Bignell. I’m an affordable, professional editor who runs Inventing Reality Editing Service, which meets the manuscript needs of writers both new and published. I also offer a variety of self-publishing services. During the past decade, I’ve helped more than 300 novelists and nonfiction authors obtain their publishing dreams at reasonable prices. I’m also the author of the 7 Minutes a Day… writing guidebooks, four nonfiction hiking guidebook series, and the literary novel Windmill. Several of my short stories in the literary and science fiction genres also have been published.